feedback and progress report

1) Video conventions; This post feels a bit unfinished George, The vids you've chosen are good examples but I need to see more of an explanation about how they conform to the conventions; currently basic and needs to be excellent!

I need to finish off the explanations, I will have this done by Wednesday. (done)

2) The Specials;  Good background info about this (great) song and video but what's lacking is any technical analysis. Its is important to at least talk about shot types and editing, but also location, lighting etc in order to push this up to excellent.

I need to go into detailed technical analysis with screenshots, I will have this done by Friday. (done)

3) Cage The Elephant; This is a good analysis George but it needs more about the technical aspects - especially shot types and camera movement. You should have screenshots from the video (5-6 maybe) with an annotation ascribing the shot type and any movement. This is important because you need to start thinking about techniques you might want to use when you come to making your own video.

I need to go into detailed technical analysis including screenshots, I will have this done by Monday. (done)

4) King Krule;  bla bla bla is not going to get you an A George!!

I need to finish this post, including screenshots and shot types, It will be done by Monday.

5) Rock The Casbah;  Once again, good on the background and context but weak on the technical aspects. Shot types, editing, miss-en-scene etc etc.

I need to add technical analysis to this, it will be done by Wednesday.